Saturday, September 26, 2009

Group 6 - Turkle

Kayleigh Johnson
Jeff Mattfield
Kara Phillips

A vague sense of Turkle's thesis is captured in the subtitle of the reading: “Thanks to technology, people have never been more connected—or more alienated” (Graff, Birkenstein, and Durst 270). As Turkle goes on to explain, what she means by this is that people are so connected through technology that they are extremely disconnected when they are in personal settings. People are always on their cell phones, laptops, etc., so even when they are in a meeting, in a class, or hanging out with friends, they are not entirely “there.” People often text, update their Facebook statuses, etc., even when they are with other people. Turkle says that because of technology, people are becoming less personal and more distanced from everyone around them.

People these days are more concerned with their personal networks and electronics then having a face-to-face conversation or meeting. Sherry Turkle brought up that people feel they are “being put on pause” when having a conversation, it’s hard to communicate with others when someone is text messaging, checking their e-mail, or updating their status. She brings up that we are no longer needed in person for a physical conversation, that the preference is leading to complete virtual communication. Overall, Turkle is concerned with the type people we are becoming since we are so obsessed with our machines and technology.

Turkle would agree with what Chast is trying to portray in his cartoon. Chast is showing that we once paid so much attention to language and spoke very elegantly, but now everyone uses “text lingo” instead because of technology. Turkle thinks that people are extremely disconnected in person because of technology, so she would probably agree with Chast's point. Turkle would probably go on to say that even lovers are disconnected and don't take the time to make their communication elegant or well-thought-out because of technology.

With Amy Goldwasser's essay on page 236, however, Turkle would find fault. Goldwasser believes that there is nothing wrong with the younger generation embracing technology. She argues that recent studies, which suggest that teenagers are less literate than earlier generations, have ignored that teens read and write on the Internet rather than on paper and are learning no less than their parents did with it. Turkle would disagree that the Internet is a good thing, though. Sure, teenagers may read and write, but the harm is that they lose out on emotional growth. She argues that a culture of cell phones has communication, for sure, but not self-reflection, claiming that it's healthier to have an emotion and to share it than to desire an emotion and to solicit it (276).

Works Cited

Chast, Roz. "The I.M.'s of Romeo and Juliet." Cartoon. New Yorker Feb 4, 2002. Rpt. in They Say/I Say with Readings. Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein and Russel Durst. New York: W. W. Norton & Company, 2009. 282. Print.

Goldwasser, Amy. "What's the Matter with Kids Today?" Salon. 2008. Rpt. in They Say/I Say with Readings. Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein and Russel Durst. New York: W. W. Norton & Company, 2009. 236-240. Print.

Turkle, Sherry. "Can You Hear Me Now?" Forbes. 2007. Rpt. in They Say/I Say with Readings. Gerald Graff, Cathy Birkenstein and Russel Durst. New York: W. W. Norton & Company, 2009. 270-280. Print.

7 comments:

  1. You did an excellent job on this assignment. First off, the way you mentioned your vague thesis but went on to explain what the author meant by it was a great move. You also mentioned nice supporting details. In your comparison readings, I enjoyed the fact that you had one that your author would have agreed with and one that your author would have disagreed with. I think the only thing you could have done to enhance this assignment would have been to add a couple more supporting points.

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  2. Great job of finding the thesis it is well explained and right to the point. The authors point of view is very recognizable. The summary is right to the point and easy to read. You maybe could have thrown in some of the authors points in the summary section. The only other negative point I have is in your comparison you kind of jump between the authors points, instead you could have one point and then a comparing point of view. Overall you did a great job.

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  3. I enjoyed your paper. This is a topic that I have read a lot of differing opinions about. Your group did a great job here. The thesis was not very clear but you went on to explain it very well. You clearly stated the authors point of view. There could have been a few more supporting points to really tie it together. I thought this was a well written paper.

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  4. This was one of the best posts yet...you hit the thesis right on and supported it well. The flow of your explanation was easy to read and contained just the right amount of information. The essays that you chose to respond to were ones that were very pertinent to what Turkle was saying (brave of you to take on the deceptively simple Romeo and Juliet one) and I could see her responding just the way that you've pointed out she would. Nice job!

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  5. I thought you guys did an awesome job on this. I like the way you wrote it. The writing style worked perfect for this essay and your thoughts were well focused. Everything you wrote you had backed up very well. I like the way that you actually made seperations between your paragraphs, I think it made it easier to follow the thoughts for the essay. Everything was very clear, and unlike most of the essays, (mine included) your thesis was straight forward and to the point.

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  6. Looks like you all worked together very well! I thought you all did a very good job with this whole essay. I really enjoyed reading this posting. Everything in this essay flowed together very well from the thesis to the supporting facts. However, I think that you might have wanted to use one or two more supporting points to back up your thesis. Overall, I think you all did a very good job on what was asked of us.

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  7. Great job explaining the writer’s thesis, I did not have to read it four or five times to sort out what you were saying. I completely agree with the statement about no one being entirely “there” anymore when in social settings. My group of friends are constantly on their phones texting while we are hanging out as a group. I often ask them “everyone’s here, who in the world are you talking to?” They always feel the need to talk to at least one person on their phone. I also agree with your point about teenagers losing out on emotional growth. Good work!

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